I'm currently trying to write out a script for a visual novel i'm making _{(remember Joan, THIS IS FOR YOU LOLOLOLOOLOL*shot*)}

So my brain's pretty much on it's end trying to make the first few lines. I know what i want to write down but i just cant phrase it into a suitable format for visual novels.

I want to release a demo out by January... And i need someone to bounce ideas from.

Preferably someone who has experience in writing thing like so:


The dirt road looked as if it was rarely used, there only being a couple of signs that travelers had taken the route.


i want you to have prior experience so you can also help with phrasing it out

i wanna write it out like how this person did it.

OH GAWD MY BRAIN'S DYIIIINNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG *A*

YOU GET CREDIT FOR HELPING!!! oAo!!

no i'm not paying you.

and no, i'm not giving you links to it's forum thread just yet.